You crane your complaints
Defining your victim life
You throw away gold
~~~
Gold always evades
Your fingers that crane for it
Never seem to grasp
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You crane your complaints
Defining your victim life
You throw away gold
~~~
Gold always evades
Your fingers that crane for it
Never seem to grasp
~~~~~~~~~~~
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Love the imagery of gold as the best we can be without being stuck in the mental attitude of victim. Both are wonderful haiku.
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Why thanks! I’m so glad you saw the imagery. That makes me happy.
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Gold can be a veil if we’re too attached to it!
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Indeed it can.
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