Emotions flow free
In my mind, a haiku forms
A window to me
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Poems let us vent
Emotions from rampant minds
A haiku is born
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For this week, I really tried to follow the idea that the first sentence can flow into the second.
And then the second can flow into the third.
Somehow, I missed this haiku fact before.
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Hello! Both haiku are great and true for me too. 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Haiku is a tricky business well done. 🙂
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Thanks!
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Really like the first one. The line ‘a window to me’ so cool and true, poetry can be very revealing.
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It can. But mine I never really about me…lol.
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🙂
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I enjoyed both
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Thank you:)
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I like both of these.
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Thank you. I could not decide so I figured, just put both out.
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T’was a good idea.
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Very nice.
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