He wooed me with such pleasurable charm.
I wondered…what if there could be more.
He did everything perfect, there was no alarm.
So I ran at full speed through his revolving door.
But his heart was elusive like a sly black cat.
As he only intended to play for a season.
He was gone before we were and that was that.
Did you ever really care or have a reason?
For a while, I cried over that star that was never in the sky.
But I should have known, he was never meant for me to keep.
He couldn’t open up, too hurt from the past or just liked to lie?
Perhaps I was his game or he was just my lesson to reap?
Now I hope you find me in some of your dreams.
And you wonder ‘what if ‘and lose some esteem.
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For Writing 201’s Day 10 Assignment:
Word prompt, pleasure.
Poetic form, sonnet.
Poetic device, apostrophe.
This was my first attempt at this pattern: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. I think I prefer to rhyme each line so I am not sure this worked. Feel free to give honest feedback as I am trying to learn the different patterns and rhythms of poetry.
Very beautiful ❤
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Thank you for your time and kind words:)
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you sound the wiser
loved your poem!
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Definitely learning as I age. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful poem!
Some don’t learn…
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Thank you. Well, if they don’t, it’s on them now cuz I’m utterly happy. 🙂
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I think your rhyming worked because l was so absorbed with your poetic story that I wasn’t thinking ‘what rhyming scheme is she using’–I like subtle and think you did a great poem.
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Thank you so much for the feedback Janice. Non-rhyming poetry is odd for me. I feel like it has to rhyme, but practicing at different options of rhyme, instead of every two lines rhyming, was a challenge. So I am glad to hear it went well. Thanks again.
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Your welcome. Great to try new things, then they just happen without planning–that’s what I hope for…
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Oh yes!! I think we all would relate here! 🙂
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I figured some could. At the time, we hurt and think what the heck happened. But eventually, we see it was a good thing. A very good thing. Now that I am in a wonderful relationship, I can see why those other dating experiences never worked out. They were just not right but I was trying to make them fit. Lesson learned. 🙂
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Yes! Me too!
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And through our lessons, we have stories and poems to tell.
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True!
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