Every time I am with you, the cold world fades away. Nothing else really matters. I cling on what you say. Your voice speaks to me gently, like a wonderful summer breeze. Your breath’s upon my neck making me… go weak in the knees. I gaze into your eyes, which restore peace within my soul. All the pain of my past is fading. Fading. No longer, will I pay its toll. In you I see wonder, kindness, and love. You promise to stand beside me, even in front of me to protect me, when things get too tough. Every day you are with me, I discover you deeper inside my mind. Somehow you have broken down my walls. I start to shed my doubts and fears, leaving them all behind. Darkness falls and we lay in each other’s arms. Skin touching. Hearts melting. We are entangled together by each other’s charm. You are more than my lover. You are more than my friend. You are who I want forever, my soul mate till the end.
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For Writing 201’s Day 3 Assignment:
Word prompt, skin.
Poetic form, prose.
Poetic device, internal rhyme.
This poem actually leads into another poem I wrote for dVerse. Read this one first though as it will explain the depth of feeling of the character in the next poem I post. (Which is scheduled to post at noon today. So the link will work by then…tick tock….)
I love, love promises of forever. Your words speak of not only romance but partnership and the last two lines are extra sweet.
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Thank you. I’ve always dreamed a soul mate was more than passionate desire, but deep friendship and trusted companion. So much and in every way a partner. Happy I could convey it. Your feedback means a lot. Thanks again.
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So very sweet!
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Yeah! Glad it came across well:)
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sigh…
lovely valentine
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So glad you liked it.
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The link to the dVerse poem goes to a page not found. 😦
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Try this….https://chasinglifeandfindingdreams.wordpress.com/2015/10/07/alive-once-again/
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Thanks!
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It’s the same one I read before and liked. 😉
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Oh, you mean the second link? That is another poem I am posting at noon today. I am giving it a moment to marinate so my head is clear before I look at it one more time. But I figured I would mention it as it is the same character in this poem. I will make it live shortly. Thank you for your feedback and understanding:)
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Please send me the link when it goes live.
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It is up now…. http://wp.me/p4XBIO-zp
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Thanks for the heads up! I’m heading over to check it out.
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It is up now…. http://wp.me/p4XBIO-zp Let me know if that does not work.
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It worked. Thank you. I love your header graphic by the way.
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Thanks! I need to update it with some more current pictures. Good reminder-thanks.
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Where is that a picture taken? It’s beautiful.
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Which one? There are a few that rotate on the header.
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Oh wow there are a whole bunch of cool images!
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Thanks!
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Clean yet inticing, and rhyming as well! Nicely done!
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Thank you so much for the feedback. It is appreciated.
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Beautiful, I enjoyed😌
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Thank you so much.
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I like how you did the rhyming – very nice 🙂
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Thank you. I wasn’t sure if the rhyming was too much or really another form of poetry but mushed together pretending it was prose.
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